descriptions of the place

Today i will describe Chelyabinsk.
Chelyabinsk it is usual Russian this city famous because meteorite. Some people fly to Chelyabinsk to see the place then down meteorite. At usual when down meteorite every living thing dies but in Chelyabinsk all arrived.  
  In our town there are a lot of sports institutions where children can go in for sports after school. There are also a lot of factories and enterprises where people of our town work.We have a lot of parks. We have a lot of monuments.The town also has a cinema. I love to go and watch movies with friends and parents.
Of course, Chelyabinsk is not an ideal place to live. Most people who come to this town for the first time say that it is grey, dirty and miserable.Our town is beautiful and interesting.

emails of complaint

dear Sir/Madam                                                                                         Chelyabinsk 21.11.2016                                                                                                                                                   Russia
I am writing complain about your internet website www.greatshopping.com. I meet a problem with your China iPhone. I have a problem with :1 it don't download games,2 why in iPhone I have (play market),3 he is smaller usual iPhone.
   1- before i have a normal iPhone and i plaid in a lot of games but now whey don't download:(.
2-when i open my iPhone i have disappointed because i sow did't apple store, i sow (play market) and i can't download (apple store).
3-wen i take it i'm invited my friend and when his come we compare our iPhone and his iPhone turned bigger his iPhone9 be like my leg, my iPhone 9 be like my hand... Why it too smaller.
I won't to returned my money because it isn't phone or you sent me another.
 I look forward to your prompt reply.
Jon Black